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Wednesday, 18 November 2015

Third person recount



WALT: Re craft a recount , changing it into third person from first person.


Splash! “ooooooh” Kevin yelled loudly as he ran quickly around the icy pool side. Suddenly Splash! He got soaked from his Dad who did a huge bomb right by him.

He chased his Dad around the pool and tried to throw water on him but he suddenly slipped and dived in the water. Kevin came back up shivering violently.

He quickly ran to his Dad and tripped his floppy legs up as he fell underneath. Kevin then quickly ran behind the middle sized blow-up-boat and waited for him to look the other way so he can sneak up on him.

Kevin quickly ran by him to tackle him but his sister popped up out of thin air and quickly snatched him up off the ground like he was 100 dollars. Then she quickly called out, “Dad! Dad!  I got him! I got him!” She yelled loudly as his ear-drums splattered to pieces. Kevin's dad grabbed him and pulled him underneath the water.

After escaping, Kevin suddenly got up and jumped out. “Wait till next time. I'm going to get you back hard” Kevin softly whispered while he wrapped himself up in his towel and sped off to his room to change into his warm soft clothes.

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